Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Ode to my Smart Phone

Dear Smart Phone..



  I hope you remember how we met, because I do remember our first meeting. It was a cold and frightful January but I was eager to you. I finally met you at the phone shop, how delightful I was to see you! I hugged you warmly in my arms and took you to my room.

  I played with you until late at night but I was never tired. I tucked you in bed tightly with your charger until tomorrow morning. I enjoyed these moments day by day. I was excited and happy and proud of you until I came to camp.
  I missed you every evening when you had to go away. My hands are lonely and my mind is bored when you are not with me. How happy I am every morning to meet you before breakfast! I skip, I run, I dance with you until you leave again.
  Don't drop tears, my old little phone, I know that you are slow. But I will use you until the end before you're too aged to use. It's been a year since we met and I hope for another fun year! Just don't stop walking in middle of games or else my scores are going back to zero. I'll see you after writing class and I hope you're waiting for me too!

Sincerely, Jiwoo

3 comments:

  1. Ji Woo (Amy),

    This is a good ode. You describe your phone well using descriptive language. Next time try to use more personificaions and metaphors to make it more poetic.

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  2. I think you love your phone very much. I also love my phone very much. I agree to your ode.

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  3. Hi!
    This is a well-written ode to your smartphone. I can tell that you really like your smartphone. Just try to use more personifications in your ode. Keep up the good work~

    -Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)

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